Friday, January 10, 2014

Cartoon Caption Contest #411

At first I worked at a particular angle that led me to this,

"Yes sir, I'm the one who complained that you're not very approachable." 

...however I then decided that it was a pretty weak attempt.  I very nearly went with,

"I'm here about the echo."

...but it still did seem quite right, so I tweaked it a little and came up with this.


Then right after I submitted it, I suddenly had serious second thoughts about including the typed echo.  It's a little bold in style, and the caption probably would have worked just fine without it.

UPDATE:  The finalists are out, and I was clearly beat by David Witus of Mercer Island, Washington.  Here it is.


I think it's brilliant.

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